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Why ??

Why am I always the one to get blamed ?
I didn't do anything wrong !
Why do you treat me like this ?
What did I ever do to you ?
All I want to know is ... why ?
Why am I the one you want ?
What is so good about me ?
When I look in the mirror all I see is a girl,
not full of love ... full of pain !
People treat me like dirt !
Why should I change for them ?
I'm just me and there's nothing I can do about it .
I didn't choose my life and I can't change ...
All I want to know is ... why ?
Why can't you accept me for who I am ?
Why is that so hard for you ?
Please ... I'm begging you !
Just tell me why ?

I would really appreciate your opinion ( i want the honest truth i can handle it )

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  • stop a bullet
    July 13, 2007

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    This poem was really deep. I love it!! I love how you keep repeating your not going to change for anyone. The words in this poem are so strong. Really great write!

    }{aley


  • PoetryDove
    July 13, 2007

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    You want the truth? Well I'm being honest when I say this, it's good. Can you handle that? LOL
    A lot of us know why, I'm one of 'em that ask that a lot as well.
    You're just you, and I think that's enough for everyone. Don't change yourself because of one person.

    Why can't you accept me for who I am?
    Why is that so hard for you?
    Please...I'm begging you!
    Just tell me why?

    Dang, that's deep. I like it a lot. Nice write, keep on writing!
    ~Poetrydove~


    • murphy07
      July 13, 2007
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      thanx

      ya i can handle that lol but this poem is about like 10 diff. people and i wasnt planning on changing lol i like who i am

  • murphy07
    July 13, 2007
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    i like it

    its good could be better but its good lol