I love you so much
I wish you didn't live so far away
you make me feel so special
Author notes
I wrote this becuase i love a guy who lives way too far away from me. <3
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I Like This
I like this poem sweet simple and to the point. Excellent work.
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OHHH! so sorry for you sweetie....You really miss him a lot...
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i do
*starts crying*
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He's not too far away, he's not, be patient sis, answers will reveal themselves in time.
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awwww damn i hate when that happens. but if the love is true then i truly believe that i can work out =) everything deserves a chance.
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yay!
I do beleive this is a haiku, right?
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yea it is =)
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yeah, I know how you feel. Sucks to be inlove with a person who lives far away. Well, yours may be 3 hours but mine is 6. The likely hood of anything is pretty much 0!! Lucky me. For once I feel like you, you always say you fall inlove with the wrong people, I just fall inlove with people I can't have. ha, alls you can do is laugh it off. Laugh it off through the tears.
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thanks so much for your comment. i'm sp glad that you liked it!
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you are suppose to reserve a spot then write off the prompt I give you
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sorry
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