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Lifelong Learning

 
No ducking responsibilities.

Free flight.

First impressions underwrite transformation.

Nestling's metamorphosis into personnified 'urge to learn' eggs on future generations ...

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20 words 20 minutes Pic
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2359384

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  • Kimojuno
    August 3, 2007

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    *applaud*

    Great job, and you are right first impressions DO stick to us, and in fact we do use them to learn and form what we are and what we know. We shouldn't push everything on our children though, and should allow them to learn and make their own experiences and mistakes, however on the reverse of that we should teach them morals and be there for them when they need us.

    Keep it up,
    Jeff.

  • Arkbear gold member
    July 13, 2007
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    Very nice grammatical choices for such a quick Write ~

    Nicely done ~

     

    Bear ~


  • azure85 gold member
    July 13, 2007
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    Oh, this is good! Your last line is great, "nestling's metamorphis" is a great description!

  • HeavenScent4U
    July 13, 2007

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    wow, you had little time but put much thought into this and it came out great. very philisophical best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed

  • azure85 gold member
    July 13, 2007
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    The picture is the prompt.
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