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Filling all the empty space
Blank expressions to embrace
Living for hope of an ace
Keeping lies without disgrace
Leaving behind not a trace
Fearing a nostalgiac place
Hiding behind a dark lace
So no one will see my true face
Wearing it like it was mace
Strumming words into a bass
Wishing I could just erase
Instead of living to encase
My fragility and all my grace
Running only for the race
Keeping back and at their pace
Ignoring flows just to trace

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  • undying
    July 21, 2007

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    excellent

    yes musn't let the memories cause us to show our weaknesses because then people might se where we are vulnerable. sucks doesn't it, how are minds betray us.


  • scottles
    July 16, 2007

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    i love this poem, it has an awesome rythym...sounds like ur inspiration is just the world, and society, etc...i think i kno how u feel

  • LookIntoTheAir
    July 15, 2007
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    I like the line "Running only for the race" the best... I'm not sure why... But it's awesome.


  • Skawe
    July 15, 2007
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    i don't quite know what to say... its a pretty poem though.


  • angleof death
    July 13, 2007
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    this is wicked good I had no idea you could write couplets.

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