Filling all the empty space
Blank expressions to embrace
Living for hope of an ace
Keeping lies without disgrace
Leaving behind not a trace
Fearing a nostalgiac place
Hiding behind a dark lace
So no one will see my true face
Wearing it like it was mace
Strumming words into a bass
Wishing I could just erase
Instead of living to encase
My fragility and all my grace
Running only for the race
Keeping back and at their pace
Ignoring flows just to trace
Please tell me what you think
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excellent
yes musn't let the memories cause us to show our weaknesses because then people might se where we are vulnerable. sucks doesn't it, how are minds betray us.
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i love this poem, it has an awesome rythym...sounds like ur inspiration is just the world, and society, etc...i think i kno how u feel

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I like the line "Running only for the race" the best... I'm not sure why... But it's awesome.

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Because you're awesome.
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i don't quite know what to say... its a pretty poem though.

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this is wicked good I had no idea you could write couplets.
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Me neither. Thanks.
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