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One Sonnet - Many Forms (Ten Versions Of A Sonnet)


I. PETRARCHAN SONNET

II. FRENCH SONNET

III. ENGLISH SONNET

IV. SICILIAN SONNET

V. ITALIAN SONNET

VI. SPENSERIAN SONNET

VII. KEATS SONNET

VIII. KYRIELLE SONNET

IX. DORN SONNET

X. SARABANDE







OUTLINE OF MY PETRARCHAN SONNET :

FORM :
* Petrarchan form of the Italian Sonnet – 14 lines
* divided into an octave and a sestet
* volta (pivot) in line 9
* written in iambic pentameter
* rhyme scheme abbaabba cdecde


The Blessings Of Oneness (Petrarchan Sonnet)

When people say “I love you”, is it true ?
What kind of love resides within a soul,
when hatred soon appears to play its role ?
Love-hatred is a quite explosive brew …
The flowers of the seeds that once we grew,
through anger’s flame have turned into black coal.
The vapour of regret does not console,
nor build the ruins of our love anew.

Yet there’s a secret salve to soothe such pain :
the balm of unconditioned love and peace,
which knows no hatred, sorrow, fear or wrath,
forever free from envy’s mortal chain.
In Union, thoughts of separation cease -
when two are one, they walk a single path …







OUTLINE OF MY FRENCH SONNET :

FORM :
* French Sonnet – 14 lines
* divided into 2 quatrains, 1 couplet and a quatrain
* volta (pivot) in line 9
* written in iambic hexameter (alexandrines)
* rhyme scheme abba abba cc dede


The Blessings Of Oneness (French Sonnet)

When people speak of love, what is it they pursue ?
What is this kind of love that dwells within a soul,
when hatred soon appears to play its fatal role ?
For love well mixed with hate creates a mortal brew.

The flowers of the seeds that once with love we grew,
through anger’s flame have turned into polluting coal.
The vapour of regret can not sad heart console,
nor ruins of our sweet abode of love renew.

Yet there’s a secret salve for soothing such great pain,
which heals the grieving heart from envy’s mortal chain :

The unconditioned love that leads your mind to peace
shall calm the wounds of grief and cool the burns of wrath,
In union, thoughts of fear and separation cease -
when two are truly one, they walk a single path …


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The Blessings Of Oneness (French Sonnet With Caesuras)

Two people speak of love; what is it they pursue ?
What is this kind of love ? What dwells within a soul ?
And hatred soon appears; it plays a fatal role.
We mix the love with hate; this is a mortal brew.

We planted many seeds; wild flowers once we grew.
But angers flames destroyed; the blossoms turned to coal.
Regret is futile smoke; sad hearts it can’t console.
To ruin turned our love; dead wood will not renew.

Yet there’s a secret salve; this balm will soothe your pain.
It heals the grieving hearts; it frees from envy’s chain :

It’s unconditioned Love; it leads the mind to peace.
It calms the wounds of grief; it cools the burns of wrath.
In union, fear dissolves; and thoughts of anguish cease.
Two souls for oneness search; they walk a single path.







OUTLINE OF MY ENGLISH SONNET :

FORM :
* English Sonnet – 14 lines
* divided into 3 quatrains and a couplet
* volta (pivot) in line 9 – conclusion in the closing couplet (line 13)
* written in iambic pentameter
* rhyme scheme abab cdcd efef gg


The Blessings Of Oneness (English Sonnet)

When people say “I love you”, is it true ?
What kind of love resides within a soul ?
Love-hatred is a quite explosive brew,
when anger soon appears to play its role.

The flowers of the seeds that once we sowed,
through anger’s flame have turned into despair.
To ruin has now turned our blessed abode,
which vapour of regret can not repair.

Yet there’s a secret salve to soothe such pain :
the balm of unconditioned love and peace,
which liberates from envy’s mortal chain,
in union, thoughts of separation cease.

True love contains no hatred, fear or wrath.
When two are one, they walk a single path …







OUTLINE OF MY SICILIAN SONNET :

FORM :
* Sicilian form of the Italian Sonnet – 14 lines
* divided into 1 octave and a sestet
* volta (pivot) in line 9
* written in iambic pentameter
* rhyme scheme abbacddc efefef


The Blessings Of Oneness (Sicilian Sonnet)

When people say “I love you”, is it true ?
What kind of love resides within a soul,
when hatred soon appears to play its role ?
Love-hatred is a quite explosive brew.
The flowers of the seeds that once we sowed,
through anger’s flame have turned into despair.
The vapour of regret can not repair
the ruin of our once so blessed abode.

Yet there’s a secret salve to soothe such pain :
the balm of unconditioned love and peace,
forever free from envy’s mortal chain,
in union, thoughts of separation cease.
True love contains no hatred, fear or pain.
When two are one, they walk their path with ease …







OUTLINE OF MY ITALIAN SONNET :

FORM :
* Italian Sonnet – 14 lines
* divided into 1 octave and a sestet
* volta (pivot) in line 9
* written in iambic pentameter
* rhyme scheme abababab cdcdcd


The Blessings Of Oneness (Italian Sonnet)

When people say “I love you”, is it true ?
What kind of love resides within a soul ?
Love-hatred is a quite explosive brew,
when anger soon appears to play its role.
The flowers of the seeds that once we grew,
through anger’s flame have turned into black coal.
These ruins here we cannot build anew,
for vapour of regret does not console.

Yet there’s a secret salve to soothe such pain :
the balm of unconditioned love and peace,
forever free from envy’s mortal chain,
In union, thoughts of separation cease.
True love contains no hatred, fear or pain.
When two are one, they walk their path with ease …






 
OUTLINE OF MY SPENSERIAN SONNET :

FORM :
* Spenserian Sonnet – 14 lines
* divided into 3 quatrains and a couplet
* volta (pivot) in line 9 – conclusion in the closing couplet (line 13)
* written in iambic pentameter
* interlocking rhyme scheme abab bcbc cdcd ee


The Blessings Of Oneness (Spenserian Sonnet)

When people say “I love you”, is it true ?
What kind of love resides within a soul ?
Love-hatred is a quite explosive brew,
when anger soon appears to play its role.

Through anger’s flame have turned into black coal,
the flowers of the seeds that once we sowed,
for vapour of regret does not console
a grieving heart who’s lost sweet love’s abode.

Yet there’s a secret salve to ease your load :
the balm of unconditioned love and peace,
forever free from envy’s mortal code,
in union, thoughts of separation cease.

True love contains no hatred, fear or wrath.
When two are one, they walk a single path …







OUTLINE OF MY KEATS SONNET :

FORM :
* Keats Sonnet – 14 lines
* divided into 4 tercets and a couplet
* volta (pivot) in line 10
* written in iambic pentameter
* rhyme scheme abc abd cab cde de


The Blessings Of Oneness (Keats Sonnet)

When people say “I love you”, is it true ?
What kind of love resides within a soul ?
To ruin has now turned our blessed abode.

Love-hatred is a quite explosive brew,
when anger once appears to play its role.
The vapour of regret can not repair.

Bewitched by sneaking envy’s mortal code,
the flowers of the seeds that once we grew,
through anger’s flame have turned into black coal.

Yet there’s a little lamp that lights our road,
which eases pain of grief and dark despair :
In union, thoughts of separation cease,

when unconditioned love we start to share.
Not two, but one, we’ll walk our path with ease …







OUTLINE OF MY KYRIELLE SONNET :

FORM :
* Kyrielle Sonnet – 14 lines
* divided into 3 quatrains and a couplet
* volta (pivot) in line 9
* written in iambic pentameter
* rhyme scheme using refrains AbaB cbcB dbdB AB


The Blessings Of Oneness (Kyrielle Sonnet)

When people say “I love you”, is it true ?
What kind of love resides within a soul ?
Love-hatred is a quite explosive brew.
What kind of love resides within a soul ?

The flowers of the seeds that once we sowed,
through anger’s flame have turned into black coal.
To ruin has now turned our blessed abode.
What kind of love resides within a soul ?

Yet there’s a secret salve that will appease,
if hatred should appear to play its role,
in union, thoughts of separation cease.
What kind of love resides within a soul ?

When people say “I love you”, is it true ?
What kind of love resides within a soul ?







OUTLINE OF MY DORN SONNET :

FORM :
* Dorn Sonnet – 14 lines
* divided into 1 sestet, 1 couplet and 1 sestet
* volta (pivot) in the couplet (line 7)
* written in iambic pentameter
* rhyme scheme abcabc dd aeaeae


The Blessings Of Oneness (Dorn Sonnet)

When people say “I love you”, is it true ?
What kind of love resides within a soul ?
To ruin has now turned our blessed abode.
Love-hatred is a quite explosive brew,
when anger once appears to play its role,
bewitched by sneaking envy’s mortal code.

Yet there’s a secret salve to soothe such pain,
which liberates from envy’s mortal chain :

by watering the seeds that once we grew,
with dew of unconditioned love and peace,
our hearts with blissful nectar we imbue,
in union, thoughts of separation cease.
Remembered is the oneness we once knew,
not two, but one, we’ll walk our path with ease …







OUTLINE OF MY SARABANDE :

FORM :
* Sarabande – 14 lines
* divided into 1 tercet, 1 quatrain, 1 tercet, 1 quatrain
* volta (pivot) in the second tercet (line 8)
* written in iambic tetrameter
* rhyme scheme aba cddc ebe fggf


The Blessings Of Oneness (Sarabande)

You say “I love you” – is it true ?
What kind of love dwells in your soul ?
Love-hatred is a toxic brew …

The flowers of the seeds we grew,
through anger’s flame have turned to coal.
Regret will not our hearts console,
nor build the shattered trust anew.

Yet there’s a salve to soothe such pain,
if selfless love becomes your goal,
that frees from envy’s mortal chain.

In Union, thoughts of anger cease –
compassion will become your path,
which knows no hatred, fear or wrath.
When two are one, they walk with ease …


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  • JM Kenyon silver member
    April 5

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    It has taken me months to get here to comment Marion... but here I am s and with the time to truly invest my attention on your beautiful sonnets and appriciate the time, heart and skill that went into crafting each one.

    Each poem has been woven beautifully into the others, each is a gorgeous piece, worthy of individual respect as well.

    A few things stood out to me as I read through this

    First, the very clever use of repeating lines You've laced these poems together very well, solidly. Though as I said, each retains the ability to be broken away from the rest and still maintains all the power and presence of that a sonnet of any forms should have.

    Second, as a whole, the formation of these sonnets grouped together gives a very French feel to the overall effort You would know that many french forms depend upon well placed repitition which you have done amazingly well.

    Third, the theme is consistent throughout but never grows tired. Your lines are so well crafted and rich in figurative langauge that love and devotion are born again and again in fresh perspective throughout.

    ONly you could have created such an uplifting, serene, and simply gorgeous piece. I'm so very glad that I have finally been given the time to read, sit, ponder and appriciate the flow of absolute beauty that always comes through you to bless others.

    Sending many S and all the best of wishes to you...

    ~Genie~


    • maa gold member
      April 6
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      dearest genie,

      time does not matter, my dear friend ...
      thank you so much for your time, energy and love you invested to read and comment on this sonnet-study ... I immensely cherish your insightful observations and kindness ...

      much love,
      marion

  • midnight eyes
    July 24, 2007

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    Wow. That was wonderful and really beutiful.


    Amber

  • Crystal Chanda Lear
    July 14, 2007

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    Exceptional!!

    You really are to be commended for putting so much careful thought, time and effort into this variety pack of sonnets. This is truly quite the remarkable accomplishment, and a very good idea indeed for practicing and composing various sonnet forms. As Margaret G was saying, this package of fine poetry would make a great teaching tool in many a classroom. I know that I have learned much about many forms of the sonnet that I was unaware of, and have never attempted before. Truly brilliant stuff, marion. BRAVO!!!

    (p.s. Perhaps you could include the Terza Rima sonnet)

    David Michaels


    • maa gold member
      July 15, 2007
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      dearest david,
      thank you so much for your time and energy to read this long entry ... your words of appreciation and encouragement mean a lot to me ...
      thank you as well for your creative suggestion of including a sonnet-version I haven't heard about yet, I will research about it now and try it out !


      maa

  • MargaretG silver member
    July 14, 2007
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    Dear Marion, I am very impressed with this opus, not only its creativity, but your patience in studying these forms and presenting the same ideas in each one. This makes the variation in forms clear, since we are not distracted by new ideas. This could be an excellent teaching tool. Genius!


    • maa gold member
      July 14, 2007

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      thank you so much, dearest margaret, for having had the patience and heart to read this voluminous entry ...
      I am actually studying the different forms of sonnets for and thanks to the sonnet-class and sonnet-multiround-contest by mamad ...
      she is an excellent teacher and has provided me with the most insightful analysis and suggestions in my classes ...

      together with mamad, david michaels, jm kenyon and epistomolus, you have been a most precious guide and mentor for me as well (not only for sonnets ... )

      I thank you for all your love and dedication,

      marion

      • MargaretG silver member
        July 14, 2007

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        It has been my pleasure to help when I could, and I must thank you for your clear insights for me.
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