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Waiting

To see patience
as simplicity's virtues
like a prolonged hiatus:
drag on, dragging on, dragged on
unto showering baggages
of torture chambers
slowly injecting:
  bubbles of uncertainty
and I,
traumatized in oceans of feelings
sunk into drunken reality

sadly waiting.

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  • sarajevo
    July 14, 2007

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    does it mean that suddenly we do not have secrets anymore ? like one big decadent reality tv show...
    welcome back,i missed you and your work !