Liquid turquiose shimmers
as sun dips to kiss
with dynamic hues;
and aquatic land speaks
in bottle-nose song delivered
upon white cap palms.
A place of peace --
a Pisces' haven.
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This is wonderfully done hunny
you should write more about nature honestly 
isn't 'delievered' a typo? (-> delivered) ?
If not, slap my head with something hard
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Thanks Lee
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beautifully done....
Truly romantic in every sense of the word...
sigh~
Lynda
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dolphins at sunset with palm trees
lovely picture
I'm not sure dynamic is the best word
I want to say gradient
but that word doesn't sound pleasent -
You are golden sun to sip,
ocean's vast erotic witness
within the realm
of fabled fingers
touching awe,
where curl wets sand
in bodies curved to wild expression
surfing season.
I like this better than my other one...you inspire me much
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I rarely write of nature.
This is just what came to mind
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prompt is
"mesmerized"
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