V ain like the gods
A lmighty like the stars light
M anipulative and swift that escapes death's odds
P ain they render so severe in just a bite
I ngenious and seductive to get on their way
R eluctant to any religion more over during the day
E ver graceful and beautiful like a gem
S o fear what should be condemned
For they are the Vampires
A contest entry
- take a look by Never.Give.Up.
550 points, ended July 27, 2007, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Vampires of Darkness creatures of the Night Reveal your Wings, Fly away with Me! by ennovy.
700 points, ended September 10, 2007, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
hope you like it.. please do criticize.. well for me i think its awful
Comments
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Congrats on the two honorable mention trophies. I'm usually not a fan of... acrostic... is it? But this actually worked quite well.. thank you for entering and good luck.
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What an excellent acrostic piece you have done, and it reads with darkness and beauty...thank for entering my contest.....novy
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Pnemonic devices, I think this way of writing can be really challenging, thinking of ideas for each letter your word topic.
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well same style of your werewolve poem yet different subject.. so gets?
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