Let the rain fall down
I want to feel it on my face
Let the sun stay in hiding
I yearn to leave this place
I'll sing my song of sorrow and anguish
As my tears seem to fall harder than the rain
My hopelessness has reached it's lowest point
It should be obvious, but no one understands my pain
I wish I could catch you
In this web of despair
Make you sink into a never ending abyss
But you won't ever care
Seeking clarity behind my door
It's as hollow these days as my soul
I almost want to say good bye
As I drift down this dark hole
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Written August 25th, 2003
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Scarlett
I could feel your pain and frustration between the lines
May a beautiful rainbow appear, and vanish all your pain
Karen
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Hey, this is really cool, it makes a lot of sense to me I guess.. But that's just me. And I wanted to stop by and thank you for your comment on my poem "Too Bad I Didn't Say Yes", I still don't know if I like it or not. It's too choppy and not really poetical at all to me. It's just not that great, But that's my opinion of it. I may just keep it to remember it. Well, this is a cool write here. I read your author page (a lot of it anyway).. and I really like your choice of words and lyrics to add to your page. That's very cool. I want to look up the band Garbage now.. I think I've heard some of their stuff from a long time ago.. but I heard it like 3 years or more ago. I'll probably look up that rain song soon because I really liked the lyrics to it. Well, I'll go now, just wanted to stop by and thank you and read some of your stuff. Cool.
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pretty
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perfect, flawless, luv it
absolutly amazing! your words are so perfectly place, emotions are so strong, i love it!! this entire poem is amazing, but my absolute fav. lines are:
Let the rain fall down
I want to feel it on my face
Let the sun stay in hiding
I yearn to leave this place
I'll sing my song of sorrow and anguish
As my tears seem to fall harder than the rain
My hopelessness has reached it's lowest point
It should be obvious, but no one understands my pain
perfect, flawless, i love it more then what i can describe. t/y so much for writing and posting this hun, i enjoyed reading it. ~Julzzz~
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this is depressing, i for one like the rain(sunlight bad). i like the mood set though. so much saddness in the world that most people are oblivious thaqt they cause. great write.
LordOfAnguish,
Tim
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wow...this is really sad....i've felt this way many a times...just keep your chin up. this is really good, as usual. i love all your poems, keep it up! good luck & best wishes!
~*Mel*~
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