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Never Play Russian Roulette with Brutus

You filthy rogue
I must admit
I never thought
it'd come to this

Your maniacal ways
caught my attention
a bestial soul with
no hope of redemption

It seemed like innocent fun
until you drew your gun

You damnable fiend.
You bat your eyes,
but I can see
past your disguise.

You lured me in
under false pretenses
You shroud me with hope
to cheat my defenses

It seemed like such innocent fun
until you drew your gun

And now here I sit
stung by your bullet
The heart you once stole
bearing a hole.
And now as I sit
I'll have to admit
I did have some fun
until you drew your gun

You squalid tramp
Don't dare pretend
You think you're sly
but all game's end

It seemed like such innocent fun
until you drew your gun

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  • fleur-de-lys
    July 20, 2007

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    I totally don't get it... but I can still picture a scene... these are some dark characters I'm seeing... good work, I liked the flow and the little repetitions.


  • Zixaphir
    July 14, 2007

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    ?????

    I'm still trying to find out what happened. Despite that, well... I don't know, but I still liked it, with its small touch of lust for vengeance unattainable.