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~Unsung Paraiso~

Uncultivated, barren land
Devastated by social-
political uncertainties.

Plants without a trace
Animals on the brink
Us, almost extinct

"Can you see me"
                        -Child utters.

A contest entry

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  • hoodoolover silver member
    July 13, 2007

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    Nice take on the prompt, I do think that the line which states Us, almost extinct would do much better with the use of 'we' thanks very much for entering