Hidden spirits motherland,
destructions chosen horror.
Decayed barren grounds,
ravaged territories dilapidation.
Debris leftover magnetic fields,
crawls nuclear poisons contamination.
Ruins
graphics
stand
strongly
obscure.
A contest entry
- Overnight Quickie Paying it Forward by hoodoolover.
1050 points, ended July 13, 2007, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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a great take on wastelands...great imagery used here and congratulations on the bronze
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Sis this is a very powerful write full of images yet i feel so much emotion I like the title not sure what or where you would take me as you directed me through to the end i found i was back in the title thinking of the silence. Congratulations on the bronze
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Great take on the prompt, it's like looking into the future....sadly , thanks for entering !
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What a picture
Taking a long look we may see things as they are. Not a pretty picture for sure. Great work here. Keep them coming my poet friend
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