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Dedicated To Patrick

He was just a baby,
About 6 months old,
Healthy,
Beautiful,
Alive,
Until the night his father took his life.

An innocent baby,
Smacked in the face,
And hit again,
Then was jerked by his arm,
Snapped in two places,
Alec had no mercy,
Espically when he shoved the perogies down his throat.

An act of hate so strong,
Sorry won't fix it,
12 years didnt fix it,
Psych wards didnt fix it,
So why are you still trying?

You dont feel remorse,
Why pretend?
You killed him!
Drunk, High, Stoned or Perked!
I dont care!
My older baby cousin is in the ground!

You killed him!
You killed apart of me!
You hurt everyone around you!
Why?
Just awnser me this!
Alec why?
All the hurt and pain,
We never took your Dad away,
So why take him away?

You left us broken,
Cold hearted,
Full of hate,
But the choice was yours,
And that was your mistake.

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Option 3...i lost a cousin to violence he'd be 20 if he was alive

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  • She burns
    July 23, 2007

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    So sad and very hurtful, oh these things when it happens, oh it never die inside of us, the hole it left in our hearts...


  • Bruised.Roses
    July 13, 2007

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    great write and I'm so sorry for your loss...I know the pain of loosing someone and I applaud you for the strength to write this keep writting and good luck
    xox
    Tash

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