As the rain falls
ye relive the past.
Realizing that all
ye lost was at last,
what they stole.
Robbed thy heart,
scorched thy soul.
When ye start
to remember as ye begin to heal,
reviewing their crimes
heaped upon thy innocence until,
it was gone with time.
Anger is cleansing as ye replay
their betrayal so wrong
in many pictures faded and frayed
never hearing thy song.
Thy rain will hold ye in it's arms
provide to thee comfort of the womb
Thy rain will not ever bring ye harm
as it protects thee, with joy not doom.
Release thy emotion
no matter the extreme
though ye cry an ocean
once gone - ye can dream
as the soft falling rain ...
Namaste~
)O(
DragonBlue
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A contest entry
- The Angel of Rain by Ted E Bare.
300 points, ended July 17, 2007, 13 entries
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Ah..the sentiments are filled with the deep sense of this great nature..and life..as well...well done..my thanks for such a wise entry in my contest...
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good, good
it was pretty good, a lil all over the place, all the ye and thy was throwin me off, but yea, its good, thanx for entering -
You captured that wonderful feeling that I always get when it rains. Something about the smell and drops that creates a romantic mood inside a soul. I want to thank you for entering my "The Angel of Rain" contest.
Ted E
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Very nice. I loved it. It was tough to pick out a favorite part. Keep writting.
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i love it
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