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~Black souls~

Dreams cease
in a childless playground;
The cultivation of promises
not sown in death's soil.
Silence plagues
unsanitary black winged souls
who dare to breathe...

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  • hoodoolover silver member
    July 13, 2007
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    Nice take on the prompt! Thanks for entering