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(Hurt)

i was hoping you would change
but no such luck
you beat me every day
til i couldnt walk
but that didnt hurt me
what hurt me was
how you put me down
all the time...
it might seem like im
rambling on but
you hurt me
and you cant take that back
now matter how many times
you apologize
you HURT me

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  • hurtgurl
    July 14, 2007
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    I relate to it in everyway possible but I was lucky I got out of it before it was to late


  • ryleealyse-emo prep
    July 13, 2007
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    its very good i can relate but only by emotional torcher