You did my wrong
just drug me along
You didn't care about me
and don't you dare disagree
You ruined my life
now all i gotta do is get a knife
And do that thing you hated so much
i use it as my crutch
*slitting of a wrist*
Can you feel my pain?
i tried to abstain
Oh well
Go TO HELL!
Tell me wut u think
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I was just checking back through everything.. and I realized you didn't read my rules.. (or you didn't care enough to listen to me) so here it is, the Magical dissapearing act! fix it up and re-enter if you want.. READ MY RULES.
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I have commented this piece before, and I will again. This piece shows so much emotion in it and it's so deep. I can completely relate to it, as I'm sure many people in your position can. Thanks for entering.. best of luck!
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Welcome to All Poetry !
This sounds like it has a lot of anger with someone who has taken you down pretty badly.
Thank you for sharing this.
If you need any help here at AP please don't hesitate to contact myself or any other online Greeter. We are always willing to help
Gaylene
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Love it. I can feel your pain, and I can relate to this piece perfectly.. Great job
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i love it i agree with it i feel ur pain
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