whisper here and there
you will spray from
a window words of
words that move
like songs from voices
let free by free hands
unchained and adrift
these words of words
grow green by the grass
catching and running
running and catching
words that press against
faces with lips so
soft laced with words
[kisses]words like that
through night when they
whisper softly speaking
words of words that
whisper here and there
Author notes
I wrote this after read a poem by ee cummings.....and if you want to know what it was...messege me
that is if your a fan of ee cummings.
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Lovely and abstract. I don't think 'words of words' needed to be repeated - it was powerful the first time.
'grow green by the grass'- that's a great way to twist the cliched 'green grass' phrase around & make it fresh again.
Ah, yes, ee cummings - I was thinking the beginning sounded reminiscent of some of his works. Your abstraction is very good.
Thanks for entering.
DancingRed.
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"grow green by the grass
catching and running"
great line.
& i love that
you didnt use any periods
and stuff..
cause that just makes this
poem even more awesome.
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nice poem..
keep it up
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which on was it mario..?
this is nice
I like the part about the running a lot
yea
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this is one of your best poems i really liked this.There nothing wrong with this but the colors make it hard to read...GREAT JOB!
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