Complaints
heard
in irritated mumbles;
cutters,
redirected
to line's end.
Glares
of 'wait your turn'
accompany
whispered gossip
as teller light signals
'next in line'.
Author notes
prompt: impatient people
In a list
Please tell me what you think
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Haha, cleverly penned. Wonderful take on prompt. Best of luck to you.
Bella
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Great take on the prompt!
As always, perfection...
Lynda
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Very well done. I had to read it a couple of times `cause it was something amazing. Good luck.
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Thank you,
glad you liked it
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Nicely done, I think I should have tried something a little easier than I did .
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Nicely done for the prompt given,I reminds me of my bank and the idiots there
, best of luck in the contest...Scott
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very well done my friend. if this doesn't describe impatient people, i don't know what will
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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