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Hound Dog of Hell

Raking in the earth
Sniveling pig, snarling and snorting,
Giggling, chortling,
Threatening all that is good and gives
Devour the hunger itself.
A cowardly creature
That takes and breaks and attacks
Backs into corners when it's yelled at
And only aches for more.
Scales of serpentine longing
Glisten on it's shivering shell;
If Generosity is the angel at the gate
Then Greed is the hound dog of Hell.

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  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    July 13, 2007
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    yes greed ..is hellish..guess we all suffer from this one , best of luck in the contest