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Saucy

A saucy smile you do bestow
my heart is ground into dust
I float in barely organized chaos
enlightened by the map of life
that tells me I am mad to love you.

Splendid is your saucy smile
cast out to melt my ruddy heart
with full disclosure
that you have sold yourself
to the highest bidder

and that would be me.

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  • michael thomas gold member
    October 7, 2007
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    Your poems are uplifting, generous and wide.


  • Star Shine
    July 13, 2007

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    I love the feel of abandon in this, the touch of passion, just the right mixture. Well done. Thank you for sharing this great entry.