I don't know who I am,
Honestly.
I'm just little ole rose,
Just me.
I used to do drugs,
Every now and then I drink.
I used to cut
But now I think.
I think that I'm cured
But I still need support.
So will you be there for me?
I need a family of some sort.
So I can be your aunt,
Your sister
Or your mom.
I just want to be someone
Because I know we get along.
If you want to know me
Just come to me and ask away.
I don't know what to tell you
Its really hard to explain.
I just want to be in your family,
But you can choose who I am
because I don't know who I want to be
If I had my choice I'd be tucan sam.
Author notes
my name is SoftlyScreaming .
im 16 (17 in a few months)
i'll be whatever you want.. im here to talk to mainly.. i also have a contest running for family members. I'm bi too (but I'm sure you know what you want), or i can be a best friend. Pick me as your pet roach, it wont really bother me.
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thank you for entering. your poem was beautiful.
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Hoodwinked
This is a very cute piece, I wrote a piece like this trying to get a family also. And now I have as many AP family members as my regular family combined together with all the cousins too. Very wonderful written piece, keep it up
Always write from the heart
Never give up
Kate
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please do me the honor of being my AP sister!
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you are versitile, highly interesting, you have had a painful past, but you are an amazing person... and this poem reflects this... definately
I must quote a thought from one of my favorite characters from literature -- the witch Angela from "Eragon" and I must say -- I would give anything to see how your future plays out...
Je t'aime <3
Zach -
great write! i shall take this into consideration on who i would like you to be in my family. SISter?? SURE THING!
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Excellent poem!
You seem like you need people around you to chat to and just unload on! Please feel free to message me anytime! I was at the place where you are now,
and I had similar problems,
I came out on top,
and would like to help you solve them. -
Awwww this one is so sweet and a bit sad at the same time....
I will be always here for you too if you want
Although I don't know you in person, you let me see a bit of who you are by your poems...and I do read them...and even can relate to some too.
I can only say they should let you be part of this family...no mather what you will be then
But your heart is of Gold
Luv ya
Take care
XXJeannette
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im alays here
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you know tucan sam, along with tony the tiger had just been pulled off the shelves last month. im not sure what the explanation was but it just sucks in general. the cereal icons are dying and whos going to save them!?
Very touching poem you have here, i can relate to the substance abuse part of it, and though the rhyming was very simple (not trite) , it kept it together and emotional.
"I don't know what to tell you
Its really hard to explain.
I just want to be in your family,
But you can choose who I am"
I like how you tied this together with;
I don't know who I am,
Honestly.
I'm just little ole rose,
Just me.
Overall, who doesn't want to be a parrot? They are beautiful and can speak human language. but i guess its not a parrot if its a tucan. what is a tucan anyway...do they eat pecans lol?
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tucan sam. nice babe..
though i would really love you to be my sisster,
i tell more to my sissters and brothr hehehe...
but i love this poem babe it was amaxing, and i love your wrights so much and i am so happy that you want to be apart of my family, let me know if you are ok with being my big sisster, sweetie much love, xoxox
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