Afterward, we lay twisted and bent
No energy left, all had been spent
Moments before that, had been ecstasy
Built on slow slides of intensity
Previous to this were our wet moves
You know ... the ones we choose
Earlier, we glided, connected that way
Me inside you, where I had to stay
Formerly, you had gripped me so
As we fully enjoyed the pace that we go
Before, we had been tongues in love
Taking our pleasures so far above
Previously, I had cruised your body
Lips and tongue doing nice and naughty
A moment earlier you had done the same
Unabashed, throat depth, without shame
We had begun with kisses so deep
Mouths affixed, and tongues so fleet
It all started when you came in the room
All woman, all mine, and all in bloom
Author notes
180 degrees
inspired by my only, true, muse
A contest entry
- Love by torturedsoul9876.
300 points, ended July 26, 2007, 12 entries
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Comments
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wow, i think there was steam coming off the screen on this one, awsome write
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wow!! so amazingly romatically...wow...lol. i loved it!!! your words were so intense and went so perfectly. amazing write. and your muse must be an amazing inspiration to be able to write something like this!
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WOW
i can piture that in my mind great work keep it up
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Thank you so very much. She is truly this, and everything to me.
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