Its never been so crystal clear
That I'm dying 6 months a year
Arguing with strangers
About why I'm still here
No one lets me forget
Questions of my realavence
I'm starting to believe their arguements
And my self-defense
Is my self-destructive ways
I thought I was wasting all my breath
But its a mystery
Why all the things that I say
Will someday fade away
Saying these things all along
My words change from words to worms
And just slither away
Some days I want to sleep til noon
Then try to explain this overcrowded room
But what can I do
No one lets me forget
Questions of my realavents
I forget the days that I do everything
And remember the days I do nothing
So I remember the days I do nothing at all
But its still a mystery
Why all the things that I do
Will someday fade away
And why I'm completely wasting all my time
Author notes
start of a song, summerschool boredom, what can ya do
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Very strong and very lyrical. Doubt and boredom very well illustrated.
Good write.
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excellent. absolutely. totally. completely.
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very powerful writing. I forgot how much I love your writing. We havn't talked in forever.... we should. This poem is outstanding. Great job.
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ah
well
here's the thing
everyday is everything, there's no way there's a day of nothing, i don't believe it
that's all
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awesome write. this will make an awesome song,
my favorite part would have to be:
No one lets me forget
Questions of my realavence
I'm starting to believe their arguements
And my self-defense
Is my self-destructive ways
I thought I was wasting all my breath
But its a mystery
Why all the things that I say
Will someday fade away
Saying these things all along
awesome imagery i loved this,
keep writing
~Ashley~<3
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