i am telling you , is that ok?
if it isn't, what do you want me to say?
I am saying you mean so much to me
You are my one my only, my everything!
Please say something before i cry
If only i could express what i am feeling inside
Do you love me or can't you speak
I am only a girl, i don't talk Greek
I am pouring my heart out and all you do is stare
Do you not understand what i am saying is rare
Why do you come closer and look at me that way
Not one step closer before i back away
Why did you kiss me like that
Will you please answer me back
Do you love me or not
i refuse to move from this very spot
You mean so very much
You send chills down my back with one gentle touch
I fell in love with you without warning you see
Please come closer and tell if you love me
Your holding me now very close
From every embrace yours means the most
Your looking in my eyes and leaning in to kiss me again
What else can I offer, my heart you win
Your whispering something so simple and so true
I finally relax as i hear " baby, i love you too!"
Author notes
this is a somewhat humorous poem that just came to me. And it happens frequently i have found to many of us. So read and enjoy
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Comments
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this poem is very clear the goal of it is easy to understand and it sticks with it, its a cute poem.
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Re read the rules, I will return to read this later.


