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Through My Eyes

Though my mouth doesn't move,
My eye's speak it.
See through me day and night if u must,
But my life's story has only begun.
As i see my life in black and white,
You have caught my eye as a handsome sight.
Though must i say you have a body of a god.
I see you as one of my own.
You gave me life beyond the clouds,
As you swept me off my feet at love at first sight!!!
We were lover's once more,
but through your eye's i saw fear.
Fear like no other man could ever dream of.
I touched you as if you were my child.
I told you not to worry, as i was your's to keep.
But life didn't go so well!!!!
You were taken from me less than a day.
As i reached for your eye's you turned away,
But in return you told me our love would last forever.
As i saw you walk into the sunset,
I saw your eye's they told me love was just the begining of a life time with you.
So i grabed my soul and traded for a life time of love and hate.
So when i see you don't turn away.
Look through my eye's and you will find my,
End.

Author notes

Your sister Kierrya Isaac. This was a poem of love and hate you can love for a life time. But in the end it is just a word. Dont let something destroy your love because love is so precious and life beyond the clouds is amazing. Dont take life for granted

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  • KelsBabez
    June 3
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    Good luck in the contest
    it was nice


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    March 29, 2008
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    Thank you for sharing your favorite poem. Best of luck in the contest.

    ♥
    whisper


  • Ephiphany
    March 28, 2008
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    What a lovely dedication...

    and an excellent entry for the prompt.
    Well done,
    thank you and good luck.

    e


  • BloodmoonFox
    December 30, 2007

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    wow this is great there is no other word i could say to express what i feel just wow. And it is so true what u say i think of it all the time u captured my attention at the first line.


  • realist07
    November 24, 2007
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    ok but its seem like a child wrote this where is the imargy, the vison, the voice, done give the reader everything we have all heard of guys swepping women off their feet but come up with a new line keep writing thought

  • realist07
    November 18, 2007

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    very intresting peice "my mouth doesnt move but my eyes speak it" i feel you 'AS I SEE MY LIFE IN BLQCK AND WHITE' nice work


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    November 6, 2007

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    wonderful job on this piece. Thanks so much for sharing with us. I appreciate it.
    Besty wishes to you

    Tory


  • HeavensNewestAngel
    September 20, 2007

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    Great poem. Can you please put in your authors comment what member of my family you would like to be please. Thank you


  • Angel Of Heaven99
    September 7, 2007

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    wonderful

    well written and emotions speak louder than words and thats what I felt, emotion. This is a great write. Good luck!


  • Hetha gold member
    September 6, 2007
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    Having had the experience of a love/hate relationship, in my past, I understand the depths and insanity plunged into the emotion of this piece. No matter how intensely you hated someone, hatred slips into love, and the lines become blurred so seamlessly. Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.


  • MzDimeDivia
    August 31, 2007
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    Lovely

    it is a poem of love and hate to know about this poem you would have to have experienced the pain joy love and heart breaks.


  • Phiona
    August 22, 2007

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    This is a beautiful poem, it manages to encapsulate the pain and the pleasure of what love, and hate, is. Congratulations on a lovely write and Good Luck.


    • MzDimeDivia
      August 31, 2007
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      thanks

      thank you so much i feel like love is a 4 letter word but to love is to have a life time


  • risewiththesmoke
    July 26, 2007

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    a very engaging, interesting and unique poem. however please remember to put your name in the author's notes! thanks!

    ~shay


  • Arkbear gold member
    July 18, 2007

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    Re-read the Rules please ~

    I am sooo sorry, but the Rules MUST

     be followed for this contest ~

     

    A beautiful write, yet it can not be considered for the Finals ~

     

    I hope you join us for the POD of today & tomorrow as well ~

     

    Bear ~


  • Swan song gold member
    July 15, 2007
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    swep should be spelled swept good write


  • LuverzTearz
    July 13, 2007
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    Great poem! Thank You for entering and good luck!I will be considering your poem during judging!


  • SeaWithYourHeart
    July 13, 2007

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    This is a superb poem however this has nothing to do with my contestXD lol This contest is a chain of 5 lines where you write 5 lines of poetry that follow on from the last entry. if you do not understand please email me


  • FloridaGatorQueen silver member
    July 12, 2007

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    This is an awesome poem. You spoke so much truth. And you described love and hate so well. Enjoyed the read!!! Thank you for entering my contest!!!

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