W
Weaving your thread of hatred and lies
you go around killing just to hear them scream
no one can stop the beast inside
behind you innocence is not what it seems
R
Rising as the devil among the rest
no one can stop him in his quest of pain
no one can hide cuz he is the best
when he's finally done he starts again
A
Anyone whose brave will know to run
some may try but all have failed
he enjoys his game and says it is fun
he knows that evil will prevail
T
The joy he gets from hearing them cry
almost hurts him as he falls to his knees
it's almost enough to bring a tear to his eye
i said almost now listen to them scream
H
Hearing their pain makes him love himself more
sometimes he's almost as bad as greed
killing is something he just adores
so much he makes himself bleed
~Kay~
Author notes
I wasn't really thinking
A contest entry
- The Seven Deadly Sins. by Pete Greenslade.
300 points, ended July 18, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Insanity by Insane-Joe.
700 points, ended December 2, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Good
good format...good rhyme...good luck in the contest -
This just got me thinking... but as always a great indepth write, its a very good way to describe Wrath at its best!!
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I think that this was alright. You could use a LOT more grammar and if you're writing a poem, it's best to use the contraction "'cause" instead of "cuz" because then the poem is more grammatically correct and it doesn't look so amateur. Thank you for entering my contest, but this is not what I was looking for.
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super . the sin wrath well explored ..in killing fields,, best of luck in the contest
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