The garden of a glimpse
Is only seen once
what beauty it holds
to see all in a rush
Fuchias and carnations overflow the newly white painted gate
and roses and its thorns whisp and turn as vines do
everything looks unharmed
from the kill of polloution
as if grown man made
but as wild as a lion's soul
but the garden is only, but a glimpse
a mirage perhaps
but once you see it
you know angels have created it
Author notes
I wrote about a garden poem, one that is always in my dreams.
A contest entry
- Have a look by celestial.
300 points, ended July 29, 2007, 19 entries
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Comments
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This sounds like a very beautiful garden. I want to go and visit it to smell the beautiful flowers. Great write.
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Awh wow i liked this one. I could really picture it and that is the work of a poet. great job and keep it up^^
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OH splendid, funny I should read this I just wrote about a poetry garden myslef....well done...keep dreaming and keep penning...
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