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" The Last Cut " ( Is Always The Deepest )....

Morning comes
The suns still coming up
Put on the coffee baby
It's finally time for love
Wake up -- Everybody in the house
We got to get out of here
And shake this damn place down

Everybody needs rock and roll
Everybody needs to feel some soul
Everybody starting to feel to damn old
Yeh! Everybody needs to rock and roll...

And it's the last cut
Thats always the deepest
It's the last cut
That always bleeds so bad
And now that I've been cut baby
Maybe you'll see why so damn bad...




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  • Breaking The Girl
    December 29, 2007
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    I like it a lot, but seems like there should be so much more.


  • Summer Dawn
    November 15, 2007

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    hi robert/ stoppin in to say hi to you and see how u are. i c u havent been on in a while. hope your summer is going well. its about over now. time to come back home.


  • blue20bunny
    July 18, 2007
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    wow amazing

    this is a great write.. thanks for sharing this with me.♥♥ .. time to drink


  • dustookie2
    July 13, 2007
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    Like the first stanza time to rattle the windows and shake it on down.Great way to meet the day babe Would love to hear you belting this one at the neighbours every morning oh revenge it would be so sweet Nicely penned babeplug it in believe the fans are gathering out front of house.