I feel empty inside
I can't believe your dead
I still have an image of you in my head
It always comes to me when Im alone
I miss the nights I spent with you on the phone
We would talk about how much we truly loved each other
That we would be married one day
And have a bunch of little kids
We always laughed and giggled
Ughhh
I miss your smirk
I miss your kiss
I now feel Im falling into an abyss
God has sent my lover away
And I am still here to stay
When should I go away my love
Shall I go now and meet you in the sky
I miss you too much for me to stay in this world until I die
I will go with you up above
Grab my hand when you see me
My one true love.
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About My Dead Ex Girlfriend
A contest entry
- Loss by Clinging-to-Life.
450 points, ended July 26, 2007, 18 entries
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Comments
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wow...this is great. I love this
: now feel Im falling into an abyss
God has sent my lover away
And I am still here to stay
When should I go away my love
Shall I go now and meet you in the sky
I miss you too much for me to stay in this world until I die
I will go with you up above
Grab my hand when you see me
My one true love."
Very well written...I can feel the pain here. I'm very sorry to hear of your loss.

