S eizing power is what they do best
L oyalty to the Dark Lord is truly the test
Y oung pure bloods boil to destroy
T o the Death Eaters, the slytherin house is anything but a toy
H ollowing and casting, they plotted to kill the Harry Potter
E verytime they tried, things just became hotter
R iled and alert, He-who-must-not-be-named is suddenly back,
I nvoked to kill, to commandeer and attack
N onsense, Fudge says. but it's true you idiot, now give him a smack!
Author notes
I <3 harry potter
A contest entry
- Slytherin's Finest by NightWish Raven88.
585 points, ended July 15, 2007, 2 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Everything Harry Potter ~ In Celebration of the New Book Coming Out!! by xxRainbowDawnxx.
515 points, ended July 26, 2007, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Definately the aim of the Slytherin's here are captured well and I liked the rhyme, as it would be hard to fit it in. Definately as I have said, the aim of the slytherins and their beliefs captured perfectly on these creases. Well written and thought out, well done on the Gold trophy, as well.
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Very Good
This made me laugh. I liked it a lot. I like that you told pretty much the whole HP story in just 9 lines. I would have to say:
I nvoked to kill, to commandeer and attack
was my favorite line. It really makes me think of my Dark Lord.
I would like also to congratulate you on being the first to enter.
Great write!!!
So do you think Potter will die in the Final Book?
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hm...if no one can stop voldemort, then, of course...probably harry will die. devastating, but there's a larger chance he'll die. seeing what we read in numero six...
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