Frosted skies
Footprints fixed behind me
The Devil cries
No flames or pain surround me
Darkened skies
Beauty draped before me
The Sun will not rise
Yet the lights burn deep inside me
Rising skies
Blue space roams so free
The darkness dies
It's time for beauty to be free
Frozen skies
The snow is always free
Blissful cries
Breathing in the air so free
Author notes
Option number 2
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Comments
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This is so beautiful. I really enjoyed reading this. Although it did make me feel a little cold...lol. Every time I read about something freezing or about snow I get really cold. But it's good because I feel the deepness of the poem as well. Great write.
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I love it.
Superb.
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