Banana yogurt ice-cream
Mongol yurt esteem
Review history to scream
Rivers forming, eyes stream
Whips lashing dream
Frozen dog team
Milk sinking cream
Words not as they seem
Banana yogurt icecream
Author notes
Trying to find words that sound pleasant together.
Please tell me what you think
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I hope this is just a nice nostalgic poem without some dark hidden meaning- because that's the way I read it, and that's the way I like it
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Oy!!
Banana and yogurt sound good
In the second line...I did not know what a yert was
but You certainly have pleasant images
Now You have made me hungry
Thank You for sharing this John!
Many blessings to You
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Woooooo
this was neat to have all the last words have the same rhyme.. well done my sweet friend.
Yvonne
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