I thought I had lost you.
I haven't seen you in a while.
You are still so young.
But I know you are not a child.
You call late at night and stay a little while.
I make you some food and talk to you again.
Then off you go leaving me in pain.
Your friend call round but he doesn't know were you are.
I think you are cheating but I am not sure so far
just the other day you were wearing something new.
I felt so hurt because I was betrayed by you.
I know you are just a cat but I give you all I can.
Then of you go like a typical man. what can I do scrappy were are you.
Author notes
Just a bit of fun when my cat came home with a new red couler after he was gone for a few day.
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In your poem I think you meant to use "where" instead of "were" and in your notes I am not sure if you were using "colour" or "collar". In any case, it was an enojyable read and a whimsical incident. Also, no one can help worrying about the ones they care for. There is a quotation that says, "Everyone's going to hurt you sooner or later, you just have to decide who's worth going through the pain." While this may be a bleak outlook, I believe it makes those we decide to hold close all the more special. Thank you for your entry.
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This is really sweet and funny. They can be such fickle creatures but it sounds like scrappy is having a good time.
Enjoyed your write.
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THIS IS SO CUTE!!!!
A very comical story and the picture is so adorable!
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Very cute! They sure are independent. He probably is off gallyvanting around. I enjoyed your poem. Good luck in the contest. The picture is precious.
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cute read. i think cats only allow us to be their owners...or is it they own us?! thank you for sharing this and entering. keep writing! God bless you always
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Oh Wow...kind of cute but I would definetly feel hurt if my doggie left us nd came back with a new couler. Very nice read. Thank you for entering. I wish you the best of luck in my contest.
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Your cat really ran away, and came home wearing a new collar hehehehehe...I would feel totally betrayed. This poem was funny.
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love this like you my spelling is not the greatest but we must express our emotions, and im thankful that you did keep pening my friend
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this is a beautiful tribute to your cat.... congratulations well done....
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