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If only i could

I don't know who i am,
Or who i want to be,
Scared of the future,
Hiding from the past,
Unable to live this moment
with u standing next to me,
I wish i didnt feel so far away,
If only your touch i could embrace,
I know i'm slightly better,
But still it's all so hard,
Even something as simple,
As the love you show to me,
Makes it hard for me to breath,
I cant help you understand,
I cant change the way you react,
So each day that passes,
You struggle, dealing with me,
I want it all to be ok,
I want to feel without the doubt,
And never go back
to these old ways.

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  • Shannon62875
    July 12, 2007

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    aww... This is a good poem! I Love it.. You did a great job expresing how you feel and im really sorry for whatever you are going through. I hope everything works out the way you want it to be!! Keep up the great work!

    Shannon*Leah<3