you served me:
breakfast in bed.
your expression, icy;
strawberries, cream
& vibrating ring
on the floor.
[cellphone silenced]
I couldn't keep you
in.
Author notes
yes, I'm sure you'd enjoy this start to your morning. *shakes head*
A contest entry
- 24-20-10 Quickie Contest [24 words, 20 minutes, 10 entries.] by blackday.
900 points, ended July 13, 2007, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Woot! I bet this is familiar to many around the world
Excellent work here and congrats on the bronze!
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Awesome work... defiantly deserving of Danielle`s daily poem...
I really loved this one
Ryan
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I l.o.l.-ed at your use of 'vibrating ring.' HAHA. I loved it though. This poem is hot & true &... wow
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Your my featured poet for the day.
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(I should probably stop because this window will be like UBER long because AP doesn't know how to wrap!)
Thank you
I'm honoured!!!
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This is the best thing I've read all day.
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really?!
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*nod*
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thank you
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Oh
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GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD.
This is just....................wowowowowowowowow.
I don't even know Christina. This is going somewhere. I'm pasthing this link somewhere.
*rufflels through internet pages*
AHAH
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Wonderfully creative and certainly original from you
Bravo hunny! You never cease to amaze me
Love
Mom
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