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nuns inhale the sun

nuns inhale the sun
sea-cast pearls around their feet...
oh giggling penguines!

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  • soulfultia gold member
    July 17, 2007
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    Clever and cute penning love the "nuns" part the best, we called them that in youth! Made me think of years.....ago! ~tia


  • I-Like-Rhymes gold member
    July 15, 2007

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    I love the imagery in this one. You have used the old cliche of nuns and penguins (sic) and made it fresh. In the very brief word canvas you have painted a full picture and included the nature/season reference (sun).
    Good work.
    Jim