I don't know who I want to be
I just want to be in your family.
You seem so nice and sharing,
I know that you're really caring.
What more can I ask for
Besides a better core?
I like you for who you are
No matter how afar.
We may not see eye to eye
But I would never dare lie.
I don't know who I want to be,
Your aunt, your sister, your mother or just me.
Maybe I won't even be in your family
Although I'd like to be.
But I don't know where I'll fit in
Or even if I'd be counted as a friend.
All I know is that I'm here for you
Think and thin, all the way through.
I'm here if you need someone to talk to,
But what part of the family, I don't know who.
Author notes
sincerity.. Thats all I ever am is sincere.. and like it or not, this is really how i honestly feel for you.. just for this particular contest
A contest entry
- Searching for an AP Family by Kappa Pyua.
300 points, ended July 26, 2007, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - An AP Family--You can NEVER have enough family by LunaAmara.
1050 points, ended August 8, 2007, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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you sound like a great friend. what a sincere and refreshing write. you sound like the girl that everyone wants in their family.
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GREAT!!
This is so sweet, and sincere!
Thanks so much for entering my contest, I know I'm going to have to reread this because it really made me smile
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Very good!!!!!!!!!! Emotion packed but softly!!!!!!!!
Seems like someone I'd like in my family, if I had one!!!
I have lived away from the family I have left so long, it seems I have none at all!!!!!!! I enjoyed reading this piece.... Good luck in the contest. -
oo sweetie this was so lovely
i wish you the best in becomeing apart
of this family, i am sure you would be great
nice poem sweet,
<3 bunches -
Understood
very well done, you even rhymed which is what I like most, and I like it that you're leaveing the decision to me.UNT good luck.
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