Its seems that our love will always be static...
...The spark is gone
Author notes
I used stactic in two contexts in this poem.
Static:
1.showing little or no change: a static concept; a static relationship. (dictionay reference.com)
2. Static electricity in realtion to a spark of love
Hope you like! Sorry about the defs, I know you know, but I'm a nerd!!
A contest entry
- Quick Contest: 13x13x13 by Exodus.
300 points, ended July 12, 2007, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Very nice. escellent, to the point, and short. Well done!!
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omg this was such a great short poem. I liked it so much. I loved how u used two different definitions. Great job =]
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Whoop i got the BRONZE
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Brilliant use of the prompt! Thank you and good luck
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don't be sorry...it's awesome.
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