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Love The Static

Charging through my veins,
pulsing from the heart.
your love is static baby.

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the shortest poem i've written...ever.

A contest entry

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  • emobaby15
    December 18, 2007
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    i liked it short sweet simple.


  • Ilma
    July 13, 2007
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    Short, but sweet. I like it =]

  • Little Bendy Straw
    July 12, 2007
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    Ummm

    So electric... So yummy


  • Anfractuous
    July 12, 2007
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    Who is IT!?


  • Dmonik
    July 12, 2007

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    Nicely done Short, sweet and straight to the point

  • Redtearstains
    July 12, 2007

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    OOh! I love the last line, this is a clean write with a semi-raunchy undertone which works really well! Excellent work!!!!!


  • Twins 4 me
    July 12, 2007
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    Great write. Best wishes in the contest!


  • Exodus gold member
    July 12, 2007
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    Wonderful! And certainly unique. Thank you for entering

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