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electric

standing still potential energy
moving you excite molecules
touching you send lightning
release

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such a marvelous prompt. zap

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  • Tattboyspet
    July 13, 2007

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    very nicely done my friend! I am so very glad that I don't try to pre-empt your poetry otherwise I definitely would've fallen short on this one!
    You have done and excellent job here with few words and I truly enjoyed it - well done!


  • Exodus gold member
    July 12, 2007

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    Oh wow. This is lovely. Not what I would have thought of in a million years with that prompt! Thank you