Numbing ghosts in
electro-magnetic hazes
Tasting karma's electrical buzz
in static's delirium revelations
A contest entry
- Quick Contest: 13x13x13 by Exodus.
300 points, ended July 12, 2007, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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not sure on this,but it has something
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wow...left me without words...


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Wow. Great take! I enjoyed this tremendously. I smell a trophy!
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Very well put together. Nice use of the prompt. Good luck.
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Very good! Love the images and intensity of this piece! Best wishes to you!

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Oh wow. Well done with this piece, it's amazing, I love your use of langage! The structure it unique, but it works well. Thank you
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