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The Unsettling Death of the Rich

There is something unsettled in the natural order

The order the religious said came from God

But now there is no God. This is a time of uprising

When the common man with his strength
The common woman with her beauty

Can rise against the old regime.

 

And the excesses feel more personal

As the old salesmen become workers

Manual workers, and good old family names

Ruined by the need to work, and their unsoiled hands

Are soiled by the actuality of work.

 

While the common man risks his life

And the common woman waits for news

Of whether her husband has been murdered

And the politicians try to build something

Out of the disasters of the past.

 

This was once a land of excesses

The extreme rich, their laughter echoing

Into the streets, where the extreme poor,

The homeless grew angry at their excesses.

 

And now the leader tries to build an empire

In this fragile nation which barely exists

That is coming under attack from the Good Old Guys

Who'll never have blood on their hands
And who never had blood on their hands.

 

The old empire attacks, and there is something else

A strange bed fellow, the old rich swine converse

With their new anti-elite Comrades

Because work is tough for the Bourgeoisie who never worked.

 

In this war zone things are changing, and the rich cannot cope

Their work brings exhaustion, why should the son trained to run Daddy's bank

The daughter brought up to shop where Mummy did be able to cope

With the hardships of work in a war zone?

 

As they are run down, and everywhere there is

A national starvation from lack of resources

A world wide death from widespread warfare

And nothing is as it was before.

 

And steadily the world is losing its religion

And in countries where Darwin and Nietzsche once lived

They have stopped believing what the Church tells them.

 

The church which lied to them, an old source of power

Is turning against them. And how terrible it must be

For those who got their income from religion.

 

And the 50 year old swine who ran the shops 20 years ago

Are in their seventies now and dying at an ever increasing rate.

 

Disease runs rampant now, there is nothing to stop it,

Though the politicians try to combat it

With work and sport, young boys are trying to exercise

To gain strength, but in this world corrupted by disease

There are always people dying.

 

One day, though, all this will be gone

The old rich will be rich again

They won't have to work

And Daddy's business will be working nicely,

Those smug nuevo riche will be controlled by dictatorships

And the new empire will be God given.

 

Because good is triumphant over the strong

And that is why there is more bacteria in the world

Than humans. And why the unsettled

Will become settled again.

 

Because when we leave the warzone

Something strange might start to happen

There might be less deaths when there are less bombs

There might be less suffering when sufferers are kept silent

A silent statistic doesn't matter, like a biblical figure does

But for now, the war zone keeps ticking, and the rich are tragically dying.

 

Warning: might depress some people and make others think

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  • LeilaJayne
    July 16, 2007
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    Made me think alot but it is a bit too irregular for my liking...


  • Endeavor gold member
    July 14, 2007

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    Very Good


    It did make me think
    and I am quite depressed at the thought of this

    There is too much to comment on here
    so I shall go back to my nieve hybernation

    Perfound

    Rick


  • W a s p
    July 12, 2007

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    It starts off (after the first verse) like the old communist rhetoric, then the marriage of new labour and the very rich. Then down the path of a useless war. I quite like this, though it will take a few more reads to really appreciate it. WASP.