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Mistake

One more thing
i couldn't say
one more kiss I
couldn't have.
One more minute
w/u I wouldn't
spend.
One more night
w/o you by me
I couldn't sleep.
One more tear
that would roll
off my face.
One more breath
I forgot to take
because I knew
losing you was my
mistake.

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  • poet43
    July 12, 2007

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    Mistakes ...

    Iq16 (now 17), this is very well crafted. I remember now you put a lot into form with meaning. I like it; I'm partial to form poetry.

    One more poem
    For me to read
    Often what you write
    Is just what I need

    poet43