To live forever,
To never die?
To never feel pain,
To never cry?
To never feel,
To never love?
To never return
To home above?
Take a bite,
Take a chance.
Taste the fruits,
Fall in the trance.
To never let go,
To stay forever?
You can die
Now – or never.
Author notes
yeah I know, sort of repetative, but I looked up Ambrosia and apparently it was a food in Roman/Greek mythology that gave anyone immortality when they ate it. I guess this poem is about someone in mythology trying to choose whether to eat Ambrosia or not.
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AHHHHHHHHHHH wow I loved it. I give it a
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Few words, but great emotions in this one. Bravo!
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This is really good..personally I wouldn't eat the ambrosia, being able to love is to important to me. And anyways it wouldn't really be worth living anymore once everyone I knows dies. But then again the Gods have other Gods...but....
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its just to good.
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Ok I've given up trying to stop coming to this page.
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I can't stop coming to this page and reading this over and over and over I LOVE It.
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He he I wish my poems were this good.
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I still love it!
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hee hee
thank you!
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brill poem
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I love it!
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