finally she thinks
i'm totally free
of the barbarous trappings
they'd placed her in
she triumphed over them
made it out
what joy and contempt
she felt at the same time
in total elation
she expressed her opinion
knowing it would only cause
more anger and frustration
on their part
oh! how fabulous it felt
beating them at their own game
she's a woman of substance
she is proud
as she should be
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A contest entry
- Say What? Picture This (Pic Inspired) by HeavenScent4U.
850 points, ended July 23, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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sorry for the typo
grammar
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this will be my judging system:
presentation
spelling & grammer
originality
how well you handled the prompt
overall
so please look over your poem and mae sure you did your best with these catagories and feel free to make changes befor i judge. again, best of luck to you and do not rate my comments or message me until after contest is jugded. thank you. be well and be blessed
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i am woman, hear me roar
that's the victorious feel i get from this by the time i get to the end of the poem 
great job, nicely penned 
i can feel the emotion within your words.
please do not rate my comment or comment me back until the end of the contest to keep this anonymous. thanks for entering and best of luck to you. be well and be blessed
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great!
Nice job here young poetess! you captured her essence of defiance! (perhaps you relate?) I love the part of her voicing her expression, knowing the frustration it would bring to "them!" Great job and much luck! John
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Sounds like the future someone I know. A few people I know actually... this has just helped me with something. Very great write, superb message and I wish you the best of luck in this contest Aunt Desi
Bandaid.
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Such a strong and powerful write. I am so proud of you!! You are such a strong woman. Excellent write
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