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Death

Decadent Dance of
Eternal Evil.
Abandoned Ashes in the
Tragic Turmoil
Hide horrors of the present.

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KJA

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  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    August 8, 2007

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    this was cool i almost thought by the title i was going to be reading something hidious great job dear


  • Forlorn Dreams
    July 20, 2007

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    this is wonderful, short and sweet, yet very descriptive. i loved it! thanks for entering and good luck
    Kelcey


  • Arkbear gold member
    July 16, 2007

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    Follow the Rules Please!!!!!!!!!

    First off....you need to read the Rules ~

     

    Secondly....I need you to dip your Quill a bit deeper and reach out for

    what you are not accustomed to writing and pen me

    something that is going to make me want to personally

    hand you the Trophy for Poem of the Week myself ~

    This is good....but the POW wants GREAT!

    I see talent in your Quill.... now show me the magic within!

    The new POD is up for today & tomorrow ~

    Bear ~


  • purpledragonfly
    July 12, 2007

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    This is great --
    loved the alliteration throughout and
    well thought out!!! Good luck in the contest
    Betsy


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    July 12, 2007

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    yes

    death isevil..but yet it can be a God send, as pain is unbearable.nice detailed poem,thank you for entering,mm

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