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ramblings

Just kind of sitting and waiting
Words long since said
Poems long since written
A heart long since read

Waiting for the words
That I have yet to speak
But my writing sucks anyway
Always lacked the proper technique

I started out okay
And thought it'd work
But I can't finish this poem
Because my attention span's gone beserk

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I tried... and failed. I wanted to write... I really did... the words just don't seem to come these days.

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  • HangingSoul
    July 18, 2007
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    hey... i so know that feeling... but u did a pretty awesome job of starting out....and well atleast you made the effort of sticking it out to the end...

    i really liked the first para though... and the first two lines of the second...it's after that that u strayed didn't u?