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[ Hello innocent one ]

Hello innocent one
new to this uncertain life
enjoy your childhood
cherish this world

A new relm
you'll soon find true
hard times to come
loved ones too

this life isn't easy
not a bit

no acceptions
no complaints
no one is equipt

Love to live
have no regrets little one

There is no human on this earth
who can prepare you
for the hardship of this life

No one said it would be easy
but I promise to you
it will soon be
worth it

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  • all star
    August 5, 2007

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    lovely poem i enjoyed reading it!!
    my favorite line was
    Love to live
    have no regrets little one!
    im in the same contest so good luck
    ana
    xxx

  • brieze
    July 16, 2007

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    i agree, it is true, but hopefully the beautiful things in life will always out weigh the hardships, because that's what makes life worthwhile.


  • CarCrashHumor
    July 12, 2007

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    honest but hopeful

    "There is no human on this earth
    who can prepare you
    for the hardship of this life"

    so true.
    nice message.