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The Saga

Fangs digging deeper
Blood thirsty heatens
Surrounding the weaker
Angered vamps
Hear my plea
Come to me
The desire for blood
An age long desire
For those imortal
She hungers
For a power
To destroy me
I weep
For the pain
We have caused
We are forever opposite
Yet
Forever the same
SHE WILL KILL THEM
ALL OF THEM
For unlike me
She desires power
Fangs digging deeper
Blood thirsty heathens
Surrounding the weaker
She will forever burn
In the heat of the sun
I will forever weep
my one and only love
Yet the vamps survive
Forever wracking havok
On souls like mine!

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I was reading Queen of the Damned

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  • hazeleyedfreak
    July 31, 2008
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    Sweet

    I like this. It reminds me of an Anne Rice write!!! Thank you for entering, and Good Luck!!


    • adidaswrits
      August 1, 2008
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      thanks

      thats exactly what iwas hoping for i was reading anne rice's novel THE QUEEN OF THE DAMNED i loved the book so much i wrote a poem about it im thrilled u liked it
      miya